Hey there! Thank to those of you who came by and commented last week. The encouragement is always appreciated. Will post a few more snippets from the same scene. I'm cheating again. It's a bit more than six, but the snippet doesn't feel complete without the last paragraph. This one doesn't quite pick up where the other one left off. I skipped ahead a paragraph.
Also, for those who don't read every week, a bit of backstory: Alex and Angela grew up together. He's three years older and her older brother's best friend. According to Alex, Angela ought to be off limits. He knows about her, through her brother, but hasn't actually seen her in twenty years. So when he runs across her in a nightclub where she works as a stripper, he doesn't recognize her. Until last week's snippet, which is here.
Drawing in a deep breath, she forced herself to look up at him. He deserved that much. “When did you figure it out?”
“When you called me A.J.” Despite the irritation in his voice, desire flared in his eyes, sending her stomach fluttering in response.
Heat crept into her cheeks, warming her face. “I’m sorry. It just…slipped out. It’s been very difficult to remember to call you Alex. I still want to call you A.J.”
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There's some sweet, sensual tension there. Great!
ReplyDeleteAgree with Laura, definitely some sensual tension between them! Look forward to finding out what happens next!
ReplyDeleteOH! I liked it! Thank you for sharing, would love to read more.
ReplyDeleteI love scenes like this where a character is surprised. I'm also partial to stories where the characters have a history. Very cool.
ReplyDeleteThe characters' history makes this scene bristle with tension! Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteI love fluttery tummy! I know exactly how she feels. Great six!
ReplyDeleteMixed feelings are always good for tension ... annoyance (?) and desire being a particularly good combo.
ReplyDeleteSo much tension here -- sexual tension plus lots of uncertainty between the two of them. Good six.
ReplyDeleteLove the sensual tension between them. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteLove couples with a shared past!
ReplyDeleteOld habits die hard! Tee hee! Wonder how they're going to work this out??? Great 6!
ReplyDeleteI like the relationship between these two.
ReplyDeleteAnd I agree with Paula who agreed with Laura.
ReplyDeleteGreat.
Nice tension between these two characters!
ReplyDeleteawww! so cute! ...and I am one of those who reads every week ;)
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