Hi there! Welcome to another Six Sentence Sunday! Thanks again for stopping by. I always appreciate all the comments. Seems such a bland thing to say, but I do meant it. :)
I couldn't decide what to post this week. So I thought I'd to go with another beginning. This one is from another WIP I'm working on the moment.
“Welcome home, Soldier.”
Standing beside the empty baggage carrousel at Las Vegas’ McCarran International Airport, U.S. Army Sergeant First Class Colten Taylor bit back a groan. The soft feminine voice behind him wound its way through his body and settled warm and familiar in the pit of his stomach. He clenched his fists as images and sensations bombarded his mind faster than he could stop them.
Warm, silky skin sliding against his. The feel of her nails biting into his flesh as her body began to tremble beneath him.
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Great opening! I love your use of fragments at the end; really worked well with the memories bombarding description.
ReplyDeleteGreat six, love his memory of her.
ReplyDeleteSweet homecoming. At least I hope so!
ReplyDeleteNice beginning!
ReplyDeleteNow THAT's the way to start a story. :-)
ReplyDeleteWonderful description. Hope they have plenty of time to make up for lost time!
ReplyDeleteSounds like he's definately glad to be home! :)
ReplyDeleteWow! What a way to start a story! I bet a soldier would rather have those kinds of flashbacks instead of battle flashbacks...
ReplyDeleteTerrific opening! I want to read on!
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