Hi there! Welcome to another Six Sentence Sunday! Thanks again to everyone who returns every week. The love is always appreciated! As promised, I'm picking up where I left off last week.
She loved this house, and right then, with the all the windows lit up, it looked warm and cozy and so welcoming it wanted to draw her in. What an ironic twist of fate. Two weeks ago, after waiting six months for Jackson to come after her and beg her to come home, she’d finally forced herself to realize he wasn’t going to. That her marriage had come to an end and it was time she faced it. She’d gone to see a lawyer and started divorce proceedings. Now here she was, back in the one place she’d sworn she wasn’t ever coming back to.
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Can feel her ambivalence and mixed emotions.
ReplyDeleteSuperb six, weaving all those mixed feeling into.
ReplyDeleteGreat scene setting with this six. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWonderful portrayal of her mixed emotions. Great work!
ReplyDeleteLove how you show her emotions! Well done!
ReplyDeleteGreat six, powerful and emotive.
ReplyDeleteYou show her emotions so well. Very sad scene. Hope things get better for her soon.
ReplyDeleteGreat six. I like that the house is welcoming her back despite her ambivalence.
ReplyDeleteVery emotional. I'm curious to know why she's there. Nice six!
ReplyDeleteSounds like she's coming full circle. I love the emotion in the scene. Great six!
ReplyDeleteVery real emotions here; nice job. I feel her pain. . . .
ReplyDeleteYou did great in showing her pain here
ReplyDeleteooohhh...great 6 :) Very emotional...nice job!
ReplyDeleteVery nice :) I am really enjoying this story as it progresses each week :)
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