Welcome to another Six Sentence Sunday! As always, I really appreciate everyone who stops by.
Since I got such encouraging responses last week, I decided to continue with the same scene. The title of this book, by the way, is A Second Chance at Forever. The funny part about this particular scene is that I rewrote it three times trying not to allow it to go in this direction, 'cause I really don't write erotic, but every time I did I ended up back here. So, I took the hint. lol
Heat rolled through her body in hot waves to settle between her thighs, making her achy and needy in the span of a single, thundering heartbeat. She drew in a shuddering breath. “Should I be?”
“Do you want to be?”
His question was silent and unspoken, but there all the same. Did she want him the way he wanted her?
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Great six - sensual and hot. Love it.
ReplyDeleteShould she be what? Awe, come on, Joanne, you can't leave me hanging like this!
ReplyDeleteNice!
ReplyDeleteWell?! Does she?!
ReplyDeleteOh, I think she does. :)
ReplyDeleteJM, you might just have a future in erotic! Great six.
ReplyDeleteWell, those characters seem to know what they wanted. Well done.
ReplyDeleteGreat sexual tension. I think she does too. ;)
ReplyDeleteI think the answer is YES! Great six!
ReplyDeleteIntense 6.
ReplyDeleteLove it when characters hijack a story. :) Sexy six!
ReplyDeleteHe's giving her a choice? Very nice! Wonder what she'll say...
ReplyDeleteYou might not normally write it, but this was pretty darn great anyway! Well done!
ReplyDeleteVery sensual, indeed!! Loving how this is going!
ReplyDeleteGreat six! Love the sudden heat!
ReplyDeleteGreat six! Thanks for visiting my blog Joanne :).
ReplyDeleteHelen
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