Welcome to another Six Sentence Sunday! I know I say it every week, but I want to first and foremost thank everyone who stops by. The comments are very welcome and appreciated. This week I've decided to take another random snippet from my current WIP. This was one of those moments where the characters took over my book.
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He was a brooder, took himself way too seriously, and just once, she wanted to see him smile, see the light reach his eyes.
What possessed her to do it, she had no idea, but the idea flitted through her thoughts and Stacy latched onto it. She picked up the sprayer sitting on the back of the sink, aimed it at him and pulled the trigger. The water hit the side of his head, drenching his neck and all down his right arm.
Colt jerked upright, twisting away from the water and turned to stare at her as if she’d gone mad. “What the hell, Stace?”
What do you think...does anybody want to read on? Should I continue with this next week?
Yes please continue next week!
ReplyDeleteOh, this was clearly frisky flirtation going on! And I just know there's going to be even more heat in the next paragraph! Great six! Definitely give us more.
ReplyDeleteOh no! This could go either way so this is great suspense building! Yes, continue next week!
ReplyDeleteGreat way to get a man's attention!
ReplyDeleteLOL Yes!! Continue! There are some people I would love to do that to, and other I do spray, just for fun. Great six! :)
ReplyDeleteI really like it when your characters take over! Fun scene.
ReplyDeleteIf she can't get him to lighten up, no one can. :) Love this.
ReplyDeleteLOL Too bad it doesn't seemed to have had the desired effect, but I'm glad she did it anyway. :)
ReplyDeleteWonder what he's going to do now! Hopefully something she likes. :)
ReplyDeleteUh-oh, seems not to have worked. Perhaps she should just tickle him. ;D
ReplyDeleteBrooding gets you the super soaker...
ReplyDeleteGood stuff. Hope she cracks his shell.