The hero, Colt, has discovered that the heroine, Stacy, has two jobs. An Oncology nurse by day...and a stripper by night. We're in Colt's POV here.
The sounds of a
busy club in full swing—music throbbing, classes clinking, quiet whispers of
conversation—all faded to a muted hum in the background as his gaze rooted to
the movement in front of him. On a darkened black stage, on the other side of
the room, Stacy danced around a golden metal pole. Having already stripped down
to a pair of panties and stiletto heels, her slender body shifted and swayed to
the sultry beat of the music pulsing throughout the club.
She knew
exactly what she was doing. The shimmy of those slim hips and the smolder in
her eyes could bring a man to his knees and entice him out of his last twenty
bucks, if only she’d keep dancing. Except the fantasies running rampant through
his mind had nothing to do with peeling away that last strip of clothing and
everything to do with a near overpowering need to storm the stage, toss her
over his shoulder, and cart her the hell out of there.
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I'm loving his POV in this six and that is a great visual!
ReplyDeleteGreat six.
ReplyDeleteGreat description (and great hero inspiration, too!)
ReplyDeleteOh- I bet this is her friend's story??? Exciting excerpt, Joanne!
ReplyDeleteNow that sounds like a man in love. Well done!
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely love it! Not only is he aroused by her, but also feels the need to protect her. Fabulous!
ReplyDeleteAnd great inspiration, too. :D
teehee, love his reaction!! Love how all the sound becomes muted as he zeroes in on her, well done!
ReplyDeleteHe's going caveman...love it!
ReplyDeleteSo possessive! Its lovely.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed his POV! Great six.
ReplyDeleteGreat six, Joanne! Very visual (and I don't mean the picture, though that's nice, too!)
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