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I couldn't decide what to post today, so I've decided to continue with the same scene, though I've skipped a paragraph of introspection. This book is the sequel to my upcoming release, A Second Chance at Forever (still no release date yet), and I've officially decided to title it, Love's Healing Touch.
Don't forget to stop the six Sunday website, to take a peek at all the other fabulous snippets. Lots of talented authors! Thanks again for stopping by!“There’s lot of things I’d like to say to you. Like go to hell.” She took a step back and shoved the door, intending to slam it in his face, but Colt’s hand stopped its momentum halfway closed.Shoulders stiff, jaw set tight, Colt stepped forward, crossing the threshold into what counted as the foyer of her apartment, merely a three-by-five hallway and a slip of vinyl flooring. His brow furrowed, his eyes boring holes through her. “How the hell could you not tell me you were pregnant?”
Good question! Great conflict in this scene.
ReplyDeleteI love this six! The last line wasn't what I expected at all!
ReplyDeleteDun dun dun!! :) Good conflict!
ReplyDeleteWhat an intense moment! A thunder-crash of a last line to your snippet, too! I loved the description of the foyer to her apartment--so true, as I unfortunately discovered in my past apartment-living days. Great six!!
ReplyDeleteWhat a cliff hanger! I like that little bit of description of her apartment in the midst of the tense scene... it really brought it to life and I could picture it. Great 6! :)
ReplyDeleteYou can't leave it there!! Great six.
ReplyDeleteOh boy! Intense moment. Great job!
ReplyDeleteUh-oh, looks like they're set up for some major conflict.
ReplyDeleteWow! That scene ripples with drama. He's angry, she's angry. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. And that's a great title choice!
ReplyDeleteLots of conflict and tension! Great six!
ReplyDeleteWHOA! Love the conflict in this scene. The action is very powerful and the emotions tumultuous to say the least! Wow. Just...wow.
ReplyDeleteWow, great tension - excellent!
ReplyDeleteEek! I want, no, need more of this story!!! Fabulous six! :)
ReplyDeleteOH, wow! That's a bombshell for sure. I'm guessing Colt won't leave until he has an explanation.
ReplyDeleteGreat scene.
Oh my. There's drama and conflict in this snippet. Excellent job with the cliffhanger question!
ReplyDeleteWow! Friction happening all over the place. Love, love, love it! She's got some explaining to do and I'm anxious to hear the answer!
ReplyDeleteYeah, that's quite a detail to leave out! She better talk fast. Great six. :)
ReplyDeleteruh-roh! Intense 6!!! And I loved your descrip of the foyer
ReplyDeleteLots of tension, great six! x
ReplyDeleteIntense. I love scenes where lovers argue. :)
ReplyDeleteHey Joanne,
ReplyDeleteI love what you've done with the beginning of the story. I especially like the details they really pull the reader right into the scene.
I see you finnally decided on a title. I like it.
Thanks, Maggie!
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